Hi today i am going to share my learning a about returning to school. I'm going to tell you a about my writing . My writing was about how i feit returning to school. I felt really happy about my writing. How can i improve my writing?
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, May 26, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Ryan.
ReplyDeleteIt is so great to see you blogging.I hope you are enjoying being back at school.What have you enjoyed most about school?.
I like catching up with the children and listening to what they have been doing over the holidays.
Eric had news in class,and said that your bike got stolen.I hope you get it back.😥
Hello Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Hello Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.
Hello Ryan.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.
Hello Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see what other things you have been working on in class.Have a great holiday.
Hello Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see what other things you have been working on in class.I hope to see some new learning soon.