Hi bloggers
We have been doing descriptive writing. I chose to write about a spaceship. My character is a tiger. I hope you enjoy. Please leave a comment.
I woke up in a spaceship in a cage. I hear strange alien noises then I saw aliens driving the ship. “let me out” said Thunder. “No” said the aliens. They were driving to their home planet. They give me dragon fruit. In two minutes later I ate, then I started to fight the aliens. I shot laser gun and breaking cages. I kill the aliens. I shoot the door down, swarm by lot’s of aliens shooting. The aliens were coming by a two by two but more were coming. I got one of the aliens gun and I fire it at the them. I saw the king with his army. I got upgrade five more gun was on me. “Get him” says the king. I shoot as fast as I can. I hear laser fire at me and see more coming all around. There were lot’s of them upgrade to five missile on me. I fire and kill all the aliens and kill the king I won.
Hello Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI was looking forward to reading your post but the words are shooting across the page.
Can you fix them so they read downwards?.
I am looking forward to reading about the spaceship.
Hello there Ryan I like your spaceship writing and I like how think (or ask for help) I like how you work and try your best and work hard at this.
ReplyDeleteHello Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI hope you are having a wonderful holiday with your family and friends.
There's only one week left of the school holidays-have fun!
I can't wait to hear about what you have been doing these holidays Ryan.
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