Hello reader.
The class has been doing a kiwi kids news article here is my article. Thank you for reading my blog post. Please leave a comment.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello reader.
The class has been doing a kiwi kids news article here is my article. Thank you for reading my blog post. Please leave a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Ryan
ReplyDeleteI love you work!
How long did it take you to make?
I wached that ruby game with my dad
Have an awesome day!
Hi Caitlin.
DeleteI like that you comment on my blog it making me happy to have a great day have great day -form Ryan
Hi Ryan it's Nijesh, I remember you doing your Kiwi Kids Article when you were near me. Your article looks like you did the same one that I did about black caps. I have a question for you. What will happen to the black cap in the future will they keep on wining or lose? Please reply to the question.
ReplyDeleteHi Ryan,
ReplyDeletegood job on your blog I remember when I did the kiwi kids new. I like how you said what you were doing. You have done a really good job on your kiwi kids news.
Hi Leo.
DeleteThanks for you putting a helpful comment your comment are out of this world there crazy cool and great comment you have sent to all of the kids on there blog thanks for you commenting on my blog you are a kind of a helpful friend to me.
hi ryan this is really small to read.
ReplyDeleteHi Ryan, This is Realklly Small to Read.
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job Ryan.I like that you found an article on cricket.I used to watch that a lot,with my mum.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time,for number 3,you could talk about the cricket.It will match the start of your work.
I look forward to reading your next post Ryan.Have a great week :)
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