Hi readers,
I wrote about an animation robbery. We were learning to write a recount. We watched a video that had been cut and make a new ending.
It was a very dark night. I was driving home from the supermarket and the car caught fire. Then I saw two men wearing ski masks. I think they looked to drive me over so I went away and found a big rock to hide there.
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They were going in the dairy. I peeked in a window. but the men with the green hoodie and ran into the door got down on the floor. The men opened the door with their hand. The smaller man put a big and put on the counter the smaller man said GIVE US THE MONEY NOW! He yelled. Don’t move or die. Then I ran into the dairy and hid behind shelf stats, threw cans of meat,
stopped threw the cans he said
no I said.
An imposter went into the dairy and killed robbers.
What a great start to your story Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI like how you told us what the robbers were doing.It's also good that you included what they were wearing.
I wonder why they were robbing the store.What do you think they were going to do with the money?.